Carmen Killed My Daughter Novel Cover

Carmen Killed My Daughter

8.0 / 10.0
The ballroom glittered with soft golden light as I adjusted the last of the rose gold balloons. Summer's 18th birthday celebration was everything she'd dreamed of—a milestone marking her transition from girl to woman, and I wanted every detail perfect. "Mom, you've outdone yourself," Summer whispered, appearing beside me in her champagne-colored dress. Her eyes sparkled with excitement as she surveyed the venue I'd spent weeks transforming into her vision of perfection. I smoothed her hair, tucking a strand behind her ear. "Only the best for my princess." The hotel's grand ballroom had been transformed with crystal chandeliers, elegant floral arrangements, and a custom cake that towered four tiers high. I'd invited over fifty guests—Summer's closest friends, our family, and several colleagues from Richard's law firm. "Where's Dad?" Summer asked, scanning the room. "Probably still at the office." I checked my watch. "But he promised to be here by seven." As if summoned by our conversation, Richard appeared in the doorway, his tall frame impeccable in his charcoal suit.

Carmen Killed My Daughter Chapter 1

The ballroom glittered with soft golden light as I adjusted the last of the rose gold balloons. Summer's 18th birthday celebration was everything she'd dreamed of—a milestone marking her transition from girl to woman, and I wanted every detail perfect.

"Mom, you've outdone yourself," Summer whispered, appearing beside me in her champagne-colored dress. Her eyes sparkled with excitement as she surveyed the venue I'd spent weeks transforming into her vision of perfection.

I smoothed her hair, tucking a strand behind her ear. "Only the best for my princess."

The hotel's grand ballroom had been transformed with crystal chandeliers, elegant floral arrangements, and a custom cake that towered four tiers high. I'd invited over fifty guests—Summer's closest friends, our family, and several colleagues from Richard's law firm.

"Where's Dad?" Summer asked, scanning the room.

"Probably still at the office." I checked my watch. "But he promised to be here by seven."

As if summoned by our conversation, Richard appeared in the doorway, his tall frame impeccable in his charcoal suit. Behind him trailed a woman I recognized with a jolt—Carmen Cox, his ex-wife.

"Helena," Richard called, striding toward us. "Sorry I'm late. Carmen and her son were just leaving when I mentioned the party. I hope you don't mind they've joined us."

Before I could respond, Carmen stepped forward, her smile practiced and perfect. "Richard insisted we stay for a bit. This is my son, Kaiser."

The young man beside her nodded politely, his eyes never quite meeting mine. Something about him made my skin prickle, but I pushed the feeling aside. This was Summer's night.

---

Hours later, the party was in full swing. Summer floated from group to group, radiant and happy, accepting gifts and compliments. I watched her with pride swelling in my chest, sipping champagne as I chatted with other parents.

"Quite the celebration," Carmen murmured, appearing at my elbow. "Richard always did have exquisite taste."

I forced a smile. "Thank you. Summer deserves the best."

Across the room, I noticed Kaiser approaching Summer's group of friends. He leaned in close, saying something that made them laugh. Then he handed Summer a drink—some sort of cocktail with a decorative umbrella.

"Excuse me," I said to Carmen, moving toward them.

But the crowd shifted, and when I reached the spot, Summer was gone. Kaiser stood alone, chatting casually with another guest.

"Have you seen Summer?" I asked him.

He gestured toward the terrace doors. "She said she needed some air."

I nodded my thanks and continued searching, unconcerned. Summer often stepped outside for quiet moments during parties.

---

I don't know how long it was before the screams started.

The first sound was so faint I almost missed it—a muffled cry from somewhere beyond the terrace. Then came the commotion of voices, running footsteps.

"Summer!" I called, pushing through the crowd that had suddenly gathered near the terrace doors.

Two of Summer's friends stood frozen, their faces pale. "We found her... back there," one whispered, pointing toward a service corridor.

I ran, my heels clicking frantically against the marble floor. The corridor was dimly lit and narrow, leading to a storage area. There, crumpled against the wall, was my daughter.

"Summer!" I dropped to my knees beside her.

Her dress was torn, her eyes unfocused and glassy. She tried to speak but only a moan escaped her lips.

"What happened?" I demanded, looking up at the gathering crowd.

No one answered. Someone called for an ambulance. Someone else mentioned police.

---

The hospital room was sterile and cold. Summer lay motionless on the bed, her clothes replaced by a thin hospital gown. The doctor had just finished explaining the evidence collection process when Richard burst through the door.

"I came as soon as I heard," he said, his lawyer's demeanor cracking for once. He approached the bed slowly, reaching for Summer's hand.

"She can't talk yet," I whispered, stroking Summer's hair away from her face.

Richard nodded grimly. "I'll make sure that bastard pays."

---

Weeks passed in a blur of police interviews and legal preparations. Summer gave her testimony through tears and halting sentences. The detective—a woman named Sarah Morrison—handled her with gentle efficiency.

"We have a strong case," Richard assured us after each meeting. "The physical evidence is damning. Kaiser won't get away with this."

At home, he spread case files across his desk, reviewing witness statements and evidence reports late into the night.

"Justice will be served," he promised, squeezing my shoulder. "I'll make sure of it."

But Summer grew quieter each day. She stopped answering her phone, barely ate, and spent hours locked in her room.

"She needs time," Richard said whenever I expressed concern. "This is normal trauma response. Once the trial brings closure, she'll start healing."

I wanted to believe him. Needed to believe him.

What I didn't see was the way his eyes flickered when he mentioned Carmen's name during our conversations. Or how he sometimes paused mid-sentence when his phone buzzed with a message he'd never show me.

I didn't know then that the man I'd trusted for twenty years was already planning to betray us both.

Continue Reading

Carmen Killed My Daughter of Contents

Ch. 1 Ch. 2 Ch. 3
Ch. 4
Ch. 5
Ch. 6
Ch. 7
Ch. 8
Ch. 9
Ch. 10

You may also like

New Release Novels

After Buying My Ex, I Learned His Dark Secret Novel Cover
8.0
The Pierre Hotel smelled like gardenias and old money. I stood just inside the ballroom entrance and let the scene wash over me. Crystal chandeliers threw soft light across a hundred faces I didn't recognize and a dozen I did. Women in gowns that cost more than cars. Men in tuxedos that fit like they were born wearing them. Waiters gliding between clusters of conversation with trays of champagne so pale it looked like liquid gold. Six years ago, I would have been one of those waiters. I took a glass from a passing tray and didn't drink it. My steel-gray gown was custom Valentino, fitted so precisely it felt like armor. It cost more than my entire first-year scholarship at Columbia.
After My Ex Called Me His Property, My Husband Struck Back Novel Cover
8.1
The champagne in my glass was vintage Dom Pérignon, crisp and biting against my tongue, but the air in the ballroom tasted stale. It was the specific staleness of old money and desperate ambition mixing under the heat of a thousand crystal chandeliers. The Starlight Charity Gala was in full swing, a sea of black tuxedos and designer gowns swirling through the cavernous hall of the Pierre Hotel. I stood near the periphery, away from the frenetic energy of the dance floor. My fingers idly traced the rim of the flute. I wasn't hiding, exactly. I was observing. Three years ago, crowds like this would have made my heart hammer against my ribs like a trapped bird. Now, I just felt a quiet, observant calm. I adjusted the silk of my gown—a deep midnight blue that Adrian had selected because he said it matched the quiet storm in my eyes.
Darkly His: The Billionaire's Fake Fiancée  Novel Cover
7.3
WARNING ⚠️: This book contains sex scenes and mature contents not fit for readers below 18+. If you love steamy romances and emotional stories, this book is the one. By day, Damon follows her rules in the kitchen: chopping, kneading, burning his fingers, and surviving her sharp mouth. By night, she follows his. Damon Blackwell is a cold, dangerous billionaire who hates Christmas, women, and anything that smells like joy. Haunted by tragedy and trauma, and memories of the girl he once loved and lost, he lives like a machine: money, control, and pleasure without attachment. Then his grandparents and three ruthless brothers dare him to do the impossible: Live like a normal man for 12 days to Christmas: no staff, no luxuries, no protection, no control and no bad temper. He has to change and be easygoing with investors. Fail, and he loses the biggest business deal of his life. Indulgence is over for him. The only place Damon knows he can grab survival? A small-town Christmas cooking competition hosted by that one woman who broke his heart years ago. Merry Steele never expected to see Damon again. The man she left without a word. The man who haunted her dreams after she broke his heart back now stands in her kitchen offering a deal she can't refuse: Cook for him. Sleep with him. Pretend to be his fiancée until the end of the year. The pay is tempting. The temptation is even greater. Before Christmas, can they resist the heat, desire, and lingering love they once shared and keep it strictly business? As family obligations, enemies, and a high-profile Christmas ball close in, Damon and Merry must correct old heartbreak, passion, and dangerous feelings. Will Damon ever forgive his fuckmate? Can Merry resist the billionaire who once stole her heart... or will old flames burn hotter than ever under the snow, the lights, and the Christmas feelings?
He Saw My Soul, Not My Scars Novel Cover
9.4
My husband, Jeremiah, let me die from an allergic reaction because he couldn't pause his video game. He dismissed my kidnapping as a prank and refused to come to the hospital when I was miscarrying our child. But the final straw came when he ordered doctors to carve skin from my body for his mistress's minor burn. He thought he had broken me, but he was wrong. I exposed his affair, took his company, and left him with nothing. Years later, he crashed my wedding to another man, begging for a second chance. "Elena lied to me! She manipulated me! It was always you, Celina!" I looked at the monster who had destroyed my life, my family, and my child. Then I picked up a wine bottle and smashed it over his head.
Luna Rejects Cheating Mate Novel Cover
8.1
I smoothed down the front of my traditional Luna ceremonial dress, the silver embroidery catching the light as I moved. Three years. Three perfect years with my mate, and tonight I wanted everything to be perfect. "Do you think he'll like the surprise?" I asked my reflection, adjusting the moonstone pendant that had been my mother's. It was the last thing she'd given me before passing, and I wore it only on special occasions. My wolf, Aria, purred with satisfaction. *He'll love it. You've prepared his favorite meal.* I glanced at the dining room table, set with our finest china and candles. The roast was resting, vegetables steaming, and a bottle of aged red wine—Tyson's favorite—hidden in the car for the final touch. "He should be home any minute," I murmured, checking my phone.
Rejected by the Alpha, Claimed by the King Novel Cover
9.7
I stared at the financial records spread across my kitchen table, my fingers trembling as I traced the columns of numbers. Three years. Three years since I'd forgiven Oliver for his affair with that rogue she-wolf, Summer Wilson. Three years of rebuilding our mate bond, of raising our daughter Hope, of believing we'd moved past his betrayal. And now this. "Large withdrawals," I whispered, circling the figures with my pen. "Every month for... two years." The amounts were substantial—more than what we spent on pack supplies. More than what we allocated for Hope's education. The destination was always listed as "security expenses," but the pattern was too regular, too consistent.
Chapters
Read now
Share