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My Dying Wish: A Fiancé's Betrayal

My Dying Wish: A Fiancé's Betrayal

My family and fiancé begged me to donate my last remaining kidney to my twin sister, Kyleigh. They didn't know I was already dying. My fiancé, Axel, gave me an ultimatum. "Donate the kidney, or I'll break our engagement and marry Kyleigh. It's her dying wish." I agreed, only for them to frame me for plagiarism with my own thesis, forcing me to confess on camera. They never knew I was the one who secretly saved our father with my other kidney five years ago-a sacrifice Kyleigh had stolen all the credit for. As they wheeled me into the operating room, they celebrated with Kyleigh, promising her a future built on my death. I was already a ghost to them. But I died on the table. The surgeon, seeing the old surgical scar and the poison riddling my body, walked out to face them. "This wasn't a donation," she announced, her voice cold as steel. "This was murder."
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Chapter 5

Jana Doyle POV: My world fractured, then reformed, not in darkness, but in a strange, ethereal lightness. My consciousness, untethered, floated above my lifeless body. I watched, a silent spectator, as the surgeons worked, oblivious to my presence. "What in God's name…?" Dr. Hermine Sanchez, the lead surgeon, a woman known for her sharp mind and even sharper tongue, exclaimed, her voice cutting through the sterile silence. Her eyes, usually calm and focused, widened in disbelief. "Her other kidney... it's gone!" a young assistant stammered. "She only has one!" A collective gasp rippled through the surgical team. "One?!" Dr. Sanchez hissed, her voice laced with outrage. "This is murder! Who let this happen?!" "Doctor, her vitals are crashing!" the assistant cried, her voice trembling. "She's... she's stopped breathing!" Dr. Sanchez rushed to my side, her eyes scanning the monitors, then my pale face. She saw it then, the subtle discoloration, the tell-tale signs. "The poison," she murmured, her voice grim. "It's too far gone. There's nothing we can do." "What do we do, Doctor?" the assistant asked, her voice tight with panic. Dr. Sanchez clenched her jaw, her gaze hardening. "We finish the transplant. We don't waste the organ." It was a cold, clinical decision, a testament to her professionalism, but I felt the flicker of pity in her eyes, a silent acknowledgment of the injustice. My newfound spirit drifted out of the operating room, through the closed doors, and into the waiting area. Axel, Joyce, and Fred were pacing nervously, their faces etched with a tense anxiety. "It's taking so long," Joyce fretted, wringing her hands together. "Is Kyleigh going to be okay?" Axel tried to reassure her, but his voice was strained, a tremor running through it. "She has to be. She will. Kyleigh is strong." He repeated the words like a mantra, trying to convince himself, to convince them all. I stood there, a whisper of a presence, directly in front of him. I wanted to scream, to rip through the veil between worlds and expose their blind cruelty. She isn't strong! I was strong! I was the one who could have made it! But my spirit-voice was soundless, a silent scream in a world that refused to acknowledge my existence. My words, potent with truth, echoed only in the silent chambers of my own fading consciousness. Fred chimed in, his voice filled with a false confidence. "Jana's a tough girl. This won't even faze her. Just a quick recovery, and she'll be back to normal." He paused, a hopeful glint in his eyes. "Then our family will finally be complete again." The irony was a bitter taste in my non-existent mouth. Complete. They saw me as a spare part, a tool to fix their broken golden child. They never once considered my own fragility, my own fading light. My pale face, my labored breaths, my constant exhaustion – they had dismissed it all, too absorbed in Kyleigh' s manufactured drama to see the truth. Joyce, clutching her rosary beads, murmured, "I just hope Jana isn't resentful. We'll explain everything to her, once Kyleigh is better. She'll understand. It's for the family, after all." A nurse' s aid rushed past, a blur of scrubs, carrying a tray of medication for Kyleigh. She didn' t spare a glance at the monitors outside the operating room, specifically the one that showed my flatlining heart rate. To them, I was just a procedure, a biological resource to be harvested. Inside the operating room, Dr. Sanchez worked with a grim intensity. Her eyes, whenever they met my lifeless form, held a flicker of something profound – pity, yes, but also a simmering rage. I saw her pause, her gaze lingering on the faint, almost invisible track marks on my inner arm, evidence of the rare, degenerative disease that had consumed me. Then, her eyes dropped to my side, to the deep, jagged scar that told a different story. The almost identical scar on my other side, the one from five years ago, the one that proved I had already given a part of myself. She knows. The realization was a sudden, searing spark in my fading spirit. Dr. Sanchez understood. My soul, a shimmering light, began to dim, pulled by an unseen force, a dark, welcoming void. I fought it, a desperate, primal urge to stay, to witness the fallout. I wanted to see their faces, their carefully constructed world shatter around them. I wanted to see them drown in the guilt of their actions. Then, the red light above the operating room door flickered, then went dark. A suffocating silence descended upon the hallway. Joyce stood up, her face a mixture of desperate hope and fear. "They're coming out," she whispered, her voice barely audible. Axel tightened his grip on the door handle, his knuckles white. He was preparing himself, ready to embrace the woman he intended to claim, fully expecting me to emerge, weakened but alive, ready to be dismissed again.
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