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Mom, Trust Me One Last Time

In this sci-fi horror story, a scientist mother implants chips into her twins to monitor their honesty. While Ryan’s chip signals perfection even when he frames his sister, the protagonist is subjected to agonizing electric shocks for the slightest perceived lie. Brainwashed into believing she is inherently evil, she suffers a genuine asthma attack on Christmas Eve. Dismissing her struggle as a bid for attention, her mother triggers a lethal shock and leaves her to die.
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Chapter 1

When I was born, I was already a certified liar. That's a fact that everyone seems to agree with.

The truth is, my mom, who's a scientist, has implanted advanced chips into me and my fraternal twin brother, Ryan Hartwell, when we were still babies.

By right, as long as we lie or make mistakes, our mom will receive the devil signal from the chips. Then, she'll administer electrical shocks as a form of punishment.

Ryan's chip often transmits the smiley signal. Even if he destroys our mom's research equipment and pins the blame on me, his chip still has the smiley branded on it.

Meanwhile, when I reach home ten minutes later than usual because I had to help out a classmate, my chip transmits the scary devil signal.

The next thing I know, I've already crippled to the floor from the intense pain caused by the electrical shock.

At first, I'll still explain to Mom what happened. But she often exclaims, "Don't think you can pull off clever little tricks just like that gambling father of yours! The chip is ten thousands times smarter than you! The punishments will only be branded into your bones if the pain is searing enough! What I'm doing is saving your life!"

After suffering from the pain countless times, I get brainwashed into thinking that I really am a liar and a troublemaker by nature.

On the night of Christmas Eve, Mom comes to the attic to tell Ryan to join the family at the table for the Christmas dinner.

That's when my asthma suddenly acts up, causing me to stumble and fall to the floor.

"I… I can't breathe… Save me, Mom…"

But Mom just coldly gazes at the devil signal that she has just received on her phone. Then, she dials the shock value to the maximum.

"You don't have asthma at all! Ugh, you're kicking up another fuss just to attract attention! Seriously, you never change your ways!"

After that, she takes Ryan's hand and leads him out of the attic. Soon, she slams the door heavily behind her.

As I suffer from asphyxiation while on my deathbed, I can't help but think that Mom is right. After all, my chip has just transmitted the devil signal.

Maybe the asthma attack really is just a figment of my imagination. I've always been a bad girl who loves lying to others, after all.

When Mom finds out that this is the last time I've ever lied to her, she must be really happy, right?

My mom, Claudia Evermore, was a brilliant scientist who never made mistakes. She always said I was an irredeemable liar. I endured both mental and physical torment from a young age, yet I had believed her without question, until that Christmas, when I was left to suffocate in the attic.

I felt like I was going to die, and panic surged. I could only gasp for air and crawl toward the door.

Footsteps thudded up the stairs. Mom hadn't left.

I trusted that Mom, the nationally renowned scientist, could save me. A glimmer of hope stirred in my heart.

"Jessie Hartwell, Ryan's hungry. What are you waiting for? I booked your seat at the restaurant. Don't make me regret it," Mom said, staring at me like I was completely hopeless.

She had been burning with fever last night, and I had stayed up all night to care for her, just for the chance to join her and Ryan for Christmas dinner. There was no way I was giving up now.

"Mom, I really can't breathe… It hurts so much…" I gasped, reaching for her in desperation.

She swatted my hand away and shoved her phone in my face.

"Jessie! You're at it again—lying and causing trouble at all the wrong times, just like your father. A leopard can't change its spots! Stay here and reflect. You can come out when you've really learned your lesson."

Ryan called out from outside that he was hungry. Mom responded immediately. She pushed me aside with a trace of annoyance before getting up to leave. My fingertips brushed against her velvet long skirt, but my touch was fleeting, and I grasped nothing.

I pounded my chest, but the air wouldn't come.

Mom locked the door behind her. From outside, Ryan said softly, "Jessie doesn't want to eat with us. Isn't she hungry?"

Mom's voice drifted back faintly, tinged with irritation. "Missing a single meal won't kill her. She needs to learn a lesson. Anyway, there are emergency compressed biscuits in the attic…"

Those emergency biscuits were long gone. Ryan had used them to paint dark, creepy images all over the walls. When Mom came home and saw the mess, she was furious and demanded to know who was responsible.

Ryan blinked up at her with wide, innocent eyes. "Not me."

I whispered, "Not me either."

As I shrank back and looked at Mom, I saw the little devil she had created.

She slapped me across the face. "Jessie! Not only do you look like your dad, but your personality is also just as dark and cunning! I regret having you!"

She always said I was like Dad, but I had never even seen him. The slap shot through me like electricity. I wondered how her hand could be so soft yet hurt so much. Even now, the pain left me numb and trembling.

Tears ran down my face as I pressed my body against the door, gasping for air. Darkness crept into my vision. The house below was silent, lit only by the faint purple glow of the display screen. It had to be my imagination. I didn't have asthma—I was lying, and this was the cost of my lies.

I remembered all the times I had messed up, and Mom had made me write an essay of self-reflection. With no pen or paper in the attic, I bit my finger and scrawled my apology on the door.

"Mom, I'm sorry. I'm a bad child. I promise I won't lie again, but it hurts so much. I'm terrified. I feel like I'm dying. Mom, please give me another chance."

Exhaustion drained me. My letters became messy, and the suffocating pressure only grew, swallowing me whole. I sank to my knees, losing all sense of time.

Then, a flash of blinding white light appeared. The weight lifted, and I felt lighter than ever.

When I opened my eyes, I was floating in midair. Below me, my body lay motionless against the door.

I was dead, but I still hadn't broken my habit of lying. Would Mom ever forgive me?

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