Follow
Chapters
Share
Service Was Mediocre: Reviewing My Billionaire Lover Novel Cover

Service Was Mediocre: Reviewing My Billionaire Lover

I woke up in a luxury penthouse with a blinding headache and bruises on my thighs, staring at the man who was about to ruin my life. Cullen Hunter, the most dangerous billionaire in Los Angeles, was stepping out of the shower, ready to discard me with a signed check and a cold look of disdain. Then the memories hit me like a physical blow. I realized I had woken up in the "Death Flag" scene of a script—this was the exact morning Avery Hall was supposed to be kicked out, humiliated, and started her downward spiral into a tragic death. The nightmare escalated within minutes. My own brother, Ernest, called to tell me I was no longer a member of the family, freezing my trust fund and evicting me from my apartment. He believed the lies of our "perfect" adopted sister, Cheslie, who had leaked her own private photos and framed me for it just to gain sympathy. Even my fiancé, Preston, couldn't wait to dump me in public, calling me a "crazy bitch" before running straight into Cheslie’s waiting arms. I was suddenly homeless, bankrupt, and the most hated woman in the city. My family wanted me to crawl back and apologize on my knees for a crime I didn't commit, while the man I had just spent the night with watched my destruction with boredom. I didn't understand how they could all turn on me so fast, or how I was expected to survive in a world where the script was literally written for my failure. "Avery, don't make this difficult," Cullen warned, waiting for the tears he thought were coming. But I refused to play the victim. I pulled three hundred dollars of my last bits of cash, slapped them onto Cullen’s nightstand, and told him the service was mediocre. I wasn't going to beg for love or mercy anymore; I was going to rewrite the ending of this story and become the most dangerous femme fatale Hollywood had ever seen.
Chapters
Share

Chapter 3

The waiter at Le Petit looked at Avery's suitcase with open disdain. This was a place for ladies who lunched, not for women who looked like they were fleeing the country.

"I'm meeting Preston Vance," Avery said, ignoring his sneer.

She spotted him in the corner. Preston Vance. Her fiancé. He was checking his Rolex, tapping his foot. He looked annoyed. He looked like a man who was inconvenienced by the tragedy of her life.

Avery dragged her suitcase over. She didn't wait for him to stand. She sat down, the chair scraping loudly against the floor.

"You're late," Preston said. He took a sip of his espresso. "And you look like a mess."

"Good morning to you too, Preston," Avery said.

"Look, Avery," Preston started. He had a speech prepared. She could see it in the way he rehearsed his hand gestures. "With the scandal... and Ernest cutting you off... The Vance family can't be associated with this kind of drama."

He was breaking up with her. Just like in the book. He was going to dump her, and then two weeks later, he would be seen dining with Cheslie.

"I agree," Avery interrupted.

Preston blinked. "What?"

"I said, I agree. The script is tired, Preston."

She reached into her purse. She pulled out the ring. Five carats. Cushion cut. It caught the light, throwing rainbows across the white tablecloth.

She slid it across the marble. It made a sharp click as it hit his saucer.

"I'm dissolving the engagement," Avery said. Her voice was clear. It carried to the next table. "You're free."

Preston stared at the ring. His mouth opened and closed like a fish. He had expected begging. He had expected her to make a scene so he could look like the victim.

"You... you're breaking up with me?" His face flushed a patchy red. His ego was bruising right before her eyes.

"You were going to cheat on me with Cheslie anyway," Avery said, leaning back in her chair. "Let's save everyone the time."

"How dare you," Preston hissed. He leaned forward. "How dare you drag her into your filth."

"Keep the ring," Avery said, standing up. "Pawn it. You might need the money for your gambling debts."

The silence that fell over the nearby tables was absolute. Forks froze mid-air.

Preston shot up from his chair. His hand shot out and grabbed her wrist. His grip was hard, painful.

"You crazy bitch," he whispered. "Keep your voice down."

Avery looked at his hand on her wrist. A cold calm washed over her.

She didn't pull away. She stepped in. She rotated her wrist against his thumb-a simple leverage point she knew from a life Preston couldn't imagine.

Preston yelped. His grip broke instantly. He stumbled back, knocking into a waiter carrying a tray of water.

"Don't touch me," Avery said. Her eyes were dead. "Ever again."

The manager was rushing over. "Is there a problem here?"

Avery smoothed her shirt. She picked up the handle of her suitcase.

"No problem," she said, smiling politely at the manager. "Mr. Vance is just leaving."

She walked out of the cafe. The sun was brighter now. The air tasted sweeter. The "fiancé" plot armor was gone. She was exposed, but she was free.

Her phone buzzed in her pocket. A text from Zoe.

I'm at the Motel 6 on Sunset. Room 204. Get here.

Avery hailed an Uber. She selected "UberX." Economy.

Inside the cafe, Preston Vance stared at the ring sitting in the spilled espresso. He was shaking with rage. He grabbed his phone and dialed Cheslie.

"You won't believe what your crazy sister just did," he spat into the phone.

You may also like

Black Card Canceled, Bill-Happy Nanny's Son Goes Berserk Novel Cover
8.0
After his housekeeper’s son, Ethan Shaw, steals his black card to fund a lavish trip, Lucas is betrayed by his girlfriend and murdered at sea. Miraculously, Lucas wakes up on the very day the theft began. Watching Ethan bask in stolen glory and prepare a grand fireworks display, Lucas decides to strike back. He quietly calls the bank to cancel the card, leaving the arrogant impostor to face the consequences of his greed in this high-stakes billionaire action story.
Bound to the calloway's heir Novel Cover
9.2
In LA's Business world, Zane Calloway, thirty, turns cartel king after his father's gruesome murder, ruling The Atlas Group with a bloody fist. He learned how betrayal could ruin even the biggest empire and was hell bent on keeping Atlas Group. However when Sienna Carter, his new assistant got in the picture, he threw caution to the wind. To become the only one controlling the cartel, he would use Sienna who was a supposedly ghost from a dead cartel as bait for his enemies. Sienna Carter made his mission become even more complicated as she ignites a dangerous sparks in him. Twenty-five year old Sienna Carter just wanted to stay alive, running away from danger had been the only thing she was capable of since her family were murdered. All she had as a semblance of her old life was the locket her dying father had given her and when a new job pops up in Los Angeles, she gambled for it, hoping for her sake that it wouldn't lead her straight to the same hell she was running from. However, she would soon realize that the Atlas Groups was going to be more than just a survival decision but the key to everything.
Enchanting Night Novel Cover
9.1
The city watches as Cade Finley publicly neglects his wife, openly preferring the company of escorts while mocking her virtue. After he invites her to find her own entertainment, the billionaire's latest scandal hits the news. Instead of playing the victim, she orchestrates a bold counter-strike. By staging a provocative photo and sending her husband a mocking anonymous message about her own supposed affair, she turns the tables on his disrespect and sets the stage for a high-stakes divorce.
I Canceled Our Wedding When He Chose Her Novel Cover
7.8
On the morning of her long-awaited wedding, Chloe is devastated when her billionaire fiancé, Elias, abandons her at the altar to assist his childhood friend in a supposed emergency. Realizing she will never be his priority, Chloe makes the bold choice to cancel the ceremony and vanish. As she rebuilds her life independently, a regretful Elias desperately tries to win her back, but Chloe must decide if his betrayal has broken her heart beyond repair.
I'm the Master the Don Searched Seven Years For Novel Cover
9.8
Betrayed and drugged by her own family, Chiara is forced onto a luxury cruise ship to serve as payment for her stepmother's gambling debts. Her relatives believe they are selling her to the powerful Don Edoardo Ariani, hoping his billionaire status will save them. However, they are unaware of a secret from seven years ago: Edoardo once knelt before Chiara, begging for her help to build his empire. As they drag her to his suite, a lethal reckoning awaits.
Leaving Husband for Self Novel Cover
9.8
For three years, Chloe endured a cold, loveless marriage to Eric, a powerful billionaire who treated her like a transparent ghost. Despite her devotion, she remained an outsider in his high-society world. Pushed to her breaking point by his indifference, Chloe finally chooses herself and demands a divorce. As she reclaims her independence and begins to shine on her own, Eric is stunned by the sudden void left by the woman he once took for granted.